Comic-O-Week: George and Lenny

[Defcon4Dan]

new Comic-O-Week. I also titled it: George and Lenny.:

http://www.geocities.com/defcon4bandsite/comic4.GIF

Thanks. Post feedback.

-Dan

[Defcon4Dan]

I forgot. Now the RF board makes an automatic link. So it won't work when you click on it. Cut and past it. Thanks. :

http://www.geocities.com/defcon4bandsite/comic4.GIF

-Dan

[Johnny Fontane]

Cut and paste it. Thanks.


Now this feels like an assignment. Forget it.

"I want you to go tonight; I want you to talk to this movie bigshot, and settle this business for Johnny. Now, if there's nothing else, I'd like to go to my daughter's wedding."

[Def Dave in SC]

If you take out the last panel, the comic is much better. But overall, these are entertaining. Except for the last panel. It was not good. Because you had the punchline in the panel before it. And that makes the comic drag on. Which isnt funny. You need to make your joke and end. Before it gets too long. Thank you. The end.

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