Need Help Brainstorming.............

[DC Reed]

Ok, heres the deal, i have a ten minute play i gotta write for a theatre fesitval, and as of now im shot on ideas (which is odd). So i figured i could come to the happy land of RonFez.net and see what you guys have in mind.

Can be Comedy, Tradegy, History anything, just my only limit is ten minutes.

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[phixion]

the story should be about selling crack
definitely
crack

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[DC Reed]

btw, were limited to high school appropriate humour. (meaning something a high school would show its kids)

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[Dewey]

Guys at a high school dance standing around talking about the girls there. Possibly cut back and forth between girls talking about guys at the same dance.

Hey, it's an idea.

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[DC Reed]

heres what i have in mind, and be brutally honest.

A president, three weeks away from the 2012 election, is trying to get re-elected, although his opponent has a higher approval ratings. So he fakes a terrorist attack in an fake city in the US, and declares war on a fake country to boost his approval rating.

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[Alice S. Fuzzybutt]

Isn't that sorta the plot of Wag the Dog?

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[DC Reed]

yeah its a bit too close for me, so im gonna rethink that, but any other ideas are welcome.

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[PeteSchwetty]

How about stay with the election and deception theme but have it at a high school (Student Council, Class Prez) or college and fit the deception to wherever the election is taking place.

I'm so broke I can't afford to pay attention.

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Use the Save Ron and Fez story. The message is that YOU can make a difference.

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[DC Reed]

How about stay with the election and deception theme but have it at a high school (Student Council, Class Prez) or college and fit the deception to wherever the election is taking place.


Ok heres what i got with that suggestion.

My school has two clubs, the Young Democrats and the Young Republicans.

The two groups are mudslinging eachother and trying to become class president.


The Parents of the Young Democrats Class Prez Canidate are Republican and Vice Versa with the Republicans.

After the dust settles and the mudslinging ends, a nerdy kid who isnt affliated with either groups wins out by a majority.

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[phixion]

arite if you cant show a story about selling crack, y not a story about using crack???
thats a lesson all future addicts should learn early in life!!!

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[PeteSchwetty]

Since you didn't like my last idea how about this one....the scene in the locker room when a college star football player comes out of the closet to his teammates....not to mention the pounding he would get

I'm so broke I can't afford to pay attention.

[DC Reed]

Since you didn't like my last idea how about this one....the scene in the locker room when a college star football player comes out of the closet to his teammates....not to mention the pounding he would get


Whoa Whoa, im not doing your life story ya know. =)

Nah i liked the who high school election thing, its got lots i can work with.

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[TheMojoPin]

After the dust settles and the mudslinging ends, a nerdy kid who isnt affliated with either groups wins out by a majority.

I can't tell...is that Nader, Forbes or Perot?

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[Alice S. Fuzzybutt]

I can't tell...is that Nader, Forbes or Perot?



Actually, it's Teve Torbes, with his Victor Mature-like scent.

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[TheMojoPin]

Actually, it's Teve Torbes, with his Victor Mature-like scent.

TOO friggin' funny...the pyramid has been topped even before it began...

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[dassal3399]

How about writing about the uncomfortable situation of a guy asking a girl out. You know all the thoughts that run through the guy's mind and the girl's mind.

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[Alice S. Fuzzybutt]

And don't forget Lamar Alexander #2.

The asking a girl on a date thing is good. How about if a guy sees a girl he likes in the school library. He sheepishly says hi and then turns to the audience and talks about all the nervous feelings he has while she studies. Everytime he makes small talk with her, he turns back to the audience and talks about it. Kinda Woody Allen-ish, but it's an idea.

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This message was edited by Alice S. Fuzzybutt on 1-8-03 @ 5:05 PM