Cybersoldier
07-28-2002, 09:12 PM
I worked on a short story couple of years ago and I thought about sharing it. In case you get bored here's something to read. If you have any comments about the story I don't mind hearing them enjoy.
Friday
As he sits in his favorite chair he turns to see a stranger at the entrance of the room. "Oh what are you doing there?" he says. No answer from the mysterious person at the door. The lights in the room only allow the gentleman in the room to see the stranger's clothes. His attempts to see the woman's face, but she moves a way. The only thing he can see was a yellow dress, the gentleman become calm and invites the person in, as he moves to the bar. The mysterious person moves up to him; he turns to find her in front of him. "I did not hear you come in, he says then he ask you want anything?" uttered the man. She points at the Whiskey bottle at his left. As he serves the mysterious woman he do not notice that murder is on the mind of his guest. Without warning she pulls out a knife and stabs him repeatedly. The man falls to the floor, he struggles to leave the room but the murderer cuts him off, and then she finish him off. After killing him she moves back to bar and drinks the whiskey her victim serve her moments ago. As she leaves she turns off the light and leaves quickly closing the door behind her. The next morning the victim's daughter tries to find him for their morning run. She goes to her parent's room and she does not see him; then she proceeds to his to his study. The room is completely dark but there was something wrong the smell of death filled the room. She did not care about the smell in the room to her the room always smelled strange, but this time it was different. There is a crack of light breaking though the heavy curtains in the room. She sees her father on the floor with a small pillow next to him. She looks at the body with an angrily stare then she moves to the window. As she open the curtain she thinks of ho to wake him up. As the light of the sun breaks though it shows, the work of a sick individual. As she turns she says, "rise and shine dad", then she starting noticing the blood on the floor. Scream of horror echoes though out the house. The entire household runs to where the sources of the screams are. As soon as they got there, the maid runs down to the master bedroom where she attempts to stop the decease' wife, but her attempt did not work and a few seconds later more come out.
Twenty minutes later
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As the police search the area, five to ten patrol cars are parked, when the detective in charge of the case arrives. "Lt. Santiago", one of the police officers called. She moves towards the cop as he leads her to the crime scene. As she enters the study, it was full of the usual people the coroner- checking the body, the photographer- taking of the crime scene and the body. "Hey detective looks like you have been partying last night," the coroner says. "Yeah, when I was going home then I got the call for this case. So, what do we have?" said Santiago. The coroner looks at her and says" we have a white male in his late thirties, stabbed in the chest and back." So what was the time of the murder?" Santiago says, "the says that the victim died around 11:00 a.m." Then on of the cops yells" Lt., you better look at this", Santiago walks out of the study. The officer points towards one of the rooms on the third floor, as the detective move too investigate. As the Santiago enters the room four are in the there. Two of them are in this large closet, one is making a notes and the other is calling for backup. "Oh Lt. you got to see this." said one of the cop, she moves to the closet. As she enters it there is a secret compartment which she see a yellow dress with blood on it. "Whose room is this?" Santiago asks "Joanne Frey" said one of the cops. "Where is she?" the Lt. demanded. "Down stairs, you want me to seal off the area?" Santiago response is "Yeah, seal off the area, I'll be down stairs". Santiago runs down the stairs, and encounters two patrol officers that just arrive. They
Friday
As he sits in his favorite chair he turns to see a stranger at the entrance of the room. "Oh what are you doing there?" he says. No answer from the mysterious person at the door. The lights in the room only allow the gentleman in the room to see the stranger's clothes. His attempts to see the woman's face, but she moves a way. The only thing he can see was a yellow dress, the gentleman become calm and invites the person in, as he moves to the bar. The mysterious person moves up to him; he turns to find her in front of him. "I did not hear you come in, he says then he ask you want anything?" uttered the man. She points at the Whiskey bottle at his left. As he serves the mysterious woman he do not notice that murder is on the mind of his guest. Without warning she pulls out a knife and stabs him repeatedly. The man falls to the floor, he struggles to leave the room but the murderer cuts him off, and then she finish him off. After killing him she moves back to bar and drinks the whiskey her victim serve her moments ago. As she leaves she turns off the light and leaves quickly closing the door behind her. The next morning the victim's daughter tries to find him for their morning run. She goes to her parent's room and she does not see him; then she proceeds to his to his study. The room is completely dark but there was something wrong the smell of death filled the room. She did not care about the smell in the room to her the room always smelled strange, but this time it was different. There is a crack of light breaking though the heavy curtains in the room. She sees her father on the floor with a small pillow next to him. She looks at the body with an angrily stare then she moves to the window. As she open the curtain she thinks of ho to wake him up. As the light of the sun breaks though it shows, the work of a sick individual. As she turns she says, "rise and shine dad", then she starting noticing the blood on the floor. Scream of horror echoes though out the house. The entire household runs to where the sources of the screams are. As soon as they got there, the maid runs down to the master bedroom where she attempts to stop the decease' wife, but her attempt did not work and a few seconds later more come out.
Twenty minutes later
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As the police search the area, five to ten patrol cars are parked, when the detective in charge of the case arrives. "Lt. Santiago", one of the police officers called. She moves towards the cop as he leads her to the crime scene. As she enters the study, it was full of the usual people the coroner- checking the body, the photographer- taking of the crime scene and the body. "Hey detective looks like you have been partying last night," the coroner says. "Yeah, when I was going home then I got the call for this case. So, what do we have?" said Santiago. The coroner looks at her and says" we have a white male in his late thirties, stabbed in the chest and back." So what was the time of the murder?" Santiago says, "the says that the victim died around 11:00 a.m." Then on of the cops yells" Lt., you better look at this", Santiago walks out of the study. The officer points towards one of the rooms on the third floor, as the detective move too investigate. As the Santiago enters the room four are in the there. Two of them are in this large closet, one is making a notes and the other is calling for backup. "Oh Lt. you got to see this." said one of the cop, she moves to the closet. As she enters it there is a secret compartment which she see a yellow dress with blood on it. "Whose room is this?" Santiago asks "Joanne Frey" said one of the cops. "Where is she?" the Lt. demanded. "Down stairs, you want me to seal off the area?" Santiago response is "Yeah, seal off the area, I'll be down stairs". Santiago runs down the stairs, and encounters two patrol officers that just arrive. They