"The Woman Who is Not a Woman (The Trip)" [Archive]

View Full Version : "The Woman Who is Not a Woman (The Trip)"

nellie

04-15-2002, 04:14 AM

A stunning woman
Who is not a woman stands before me
Dark brown hair in a hairchif
Piercing green-gray eyes looking at me
I hear her speak
I see her
And only her
She stops talking and smiles
She see I'm elsewhere
God I love her smile
It lights up her face
And makes her eyes shine
She is a goddess to me
This woman who is not a woman
____________________________________________

another poem:

I'm not your servant
Not your slave
I'm not here
To wait on you hand and foot
I am your wife
Your partner
Your equal
Don't treat me
Like I'm beneath you
Or I will leave you
Find some one
Who can treat me with the respect that I deserve

This message was edited by nellie on 4-16-02 @ 3:12 PM

ROMEO

04-15-2002, 08:49 PM

You had better wait on me hand and foot, serve me like no other. No just kidding nellie, 2nd poems great,1st I understand you, and feel ya,but can't feel what you feel, I'm glad I'M not in your shoes.*hugs* for ya

<HTML>
<img src="http://members.hometown.aol.com/at992006/images/kissuntitled.bmp">
</HTML>
GOD BLESS, tx oz

nellie

04-16-2002, 05:11 AM

I'm glad I'M not in your shoes

what do you mean?

i am a hopeless romantic, i am in love......