i wrote a poem

[nellie]

The Battle

My glaive in one hand
My cepter in the other
Fear and desperation
Longing for courage
And the strength to save the ones I love
Endless battle
And no light to be seen
Running for days
Hands bloodied by enimies
Relentless battle in the fire of Hell
Agony of the people I care for
As they died in my arms
I am the only one left
And I must continue to battle...



This message was edited by nellie on 3-14-02 @ 4:04 PM

[zathrus]

nellie
that was pretty good.

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[nellie]

thank you zathrus, what does everyone else think.

i am the inner child..... quiet, sensitive, and shy

[reeshy]

Spelling and syntax.

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This message was edited by reeshy on 3-14-02 @ 4:24 PM

[PanterA]

I wrote a poem too.

Is This Love?

Her name is flowing threw the wind,
Your mind fills with joy.
You finally get down her pants
And find out she's a boy.

http://www.members.aol.com/rnfpantera/rfsigI crush the rush! I rule you fool!

[nellie]

what? i really didn't have a format for the poem, it's what came to me. i suck at spelling, so yeah of course there's gonna be errors.
syntax?

i am the inner child..... quiet, sensitive, and shy

[DarkHippie]

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[Christy]

what? i really didn't have a format for the poem, it's what came to me. i suck at spelling, so yeah of course there's gonna be errors.
syntax?


I used to worry about my poems following a special format ... F*** that! It's what you feel in your heart and mind that matters ... send me some more of your poetry, I would love to read it!

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[Earth2RON]

cool words nellie.

Her name is flowing threw the wind, Your mind fills with joy. You finally get down her pants And find out she's a boy.


you is a funny guy PANTERa..with an a i got it now

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